Scary Experience?!?!

At first we were asked to to correct an essay each titled ‘A Scary Experience’ but we did not know how, so Miss Yoon allowed us to do this in groups. For my group’s particular essay, we gave it 13 out of 20 marks. From the essay, I can clearly get what the students is trying to tell. As we are dealing with students with a weak proficiency in English language, we did not focus too much on the general mistakes. We focused on the ideas more as mechanical errors are something that can be improved in time. We could easily get the flow of the ideas of the story, ideas that are interesting and relevant to the topic from the essay. Furthermore, the student was able to certain terms or words that shows a good usage of English such as leisurely and good intention. In conclusion, this student showed a significant command of the language. Thus, we give this piece of work 13!!!